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Wednesday, January 31, 2007
Looking for constructive feedback
I'm working on a flyer for the Women's Retreat. I need to have it done in less than 24 hours. So if you see this within the time frame, let me know what you think. Click on the image to see a detailed image. Thanks.
8 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Looks great, Ange! Juli's name doesn't have an 'e', though. The only thing I would add is maybe info about when to register (do we have a deadline)?
Hey Angie, not sure if you're still looking for feedback, but try switching the photos and text so that you see the photos first, then the text--it's better on the eyes. Also, another small mis-spelling is "activies".
Oh yes, if you can, make the photos a little bigger. There just too gorgeous not to be seen.
8 comments:
Looks great, Ange! Juli's name doesn't have an 'e', though. The only thing I would add is maybe info about when to register (do we have a deadline)?
And that's why I need input.
Thanks.
Looks good, I want to go too ;)
Good feedback Ash! I didn't think about that...
Hey Angie, not sure if you're still looking for feedback, but try switching the photos and text so that you see the photos first, then the text--it's better on the eyes. Also, another small mis-spelling is "activies".
Oh yes, if you can, make the photos a little bigger. There just too gorgeous not to be seen.
It looks and reads great!
P.S. I love the Rest, Relax, and Heal in the shadows. Good stuff.
Crud! I hate typos. I think it's too late. :O(
Thanks Chris! We were able to get the typo fixed. But we just don't have time now to play with the other.
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